Poem Critique - Are You The One - Part 1?

Hey!





OK...so sorry about this week's post. It's a "little" long. It's in 2 parts. This is part 1, please read part 2 and/or part 3 to complete the poem.





I made this from a request this girl made to me. She wanted me to write something about her situation with this boy she really liked. It was hard but interesting, had to put myself in her shoe and try and feel everything she must've felt. Hope you enjoy. I call it, "Are You The One?"





Are You The One?





Are you the one


I've been looking for?


Are you the one


For me?


Are you the one


To make me complete?


To protect me?


And love me


For all eternity?


Or is it all an illusion?


From all my hopes and dreams


I hope and pray


To God each day


That you will see


How much I love you so


And maybe


I was meant for you


And you for me

Poem Critique - Are You The One - Part 1?
wow nice poem, i hope he says yes... but where is part 2.



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